I am thanking God too,this is a fantasy poem,I wright it because my neighbor girl was watching all these things and everyone say she has eye of bad evil on her.I find this story very interesting so I write this one.
I want nothing to do with that apple. LOL! The contrast in that pic takes us back to the beginning on humanity, if you’re a creationist. The apple that sent the ship sinking. but the reality is sobering. The apple, not the woman. But it was all a dream. lol!
Ok now. ease off the greatness and stuff. simple observation. Nice poem though. U built a little suspense that encouraged readers to keep reading and wake them up from nightmare at the end. nicely done.
thank you,you always keeps up my moral.:-)
great poem! You’re a very talented and creative young lady! keep it up!
be aware of old lady….. 😀
dusht old lady…dara diya tmhe……….take cr….bach k rhna………. 🙂
yeah! of course, dubara dikhegi tab to likhne ke kaabil bhi nahi chodegi…….. 😀
WoW! Thank God you are fine!
I am thanking God too,this is a fantasy poem,I wright it because my neighbor girl was watching all these things and everyone say she has eye of bad evil on her.I find this story very interesting so I write this one.
I want nothing to do with that apple. LOL! The contrast in that pic takes us back to the beginning on humanity, if you’re a creationist. The apple that sent the ship sinking. but the reality is sobering. The apple, not the woman. But it was all a dream. lol!
Nicely said! you are a great philosopher,and deep thinker.I am so happy that you spend your precious time in writing these pleasing words.
Ok now. ease off the greatness and stuff. simple observation. Nice poem though. U built a little suspense that encouraged readers to keep reading and wake them up from nightmare at the end. nicely done.
thank you,you always keeps up my moral.:-)
great poem! You’re a very talented and creative young lady! keep it up!
thanks Mary,you are very generous towards me,I will try to keep going,thanks again for appreciating me. 🙂
hey soundarya… nicely written.. it made me to read the whole poem of yours. it was attractive… and aap aise hi likhte rehna.. keep on blogging
thanks a lot for your kind words.
thank you for visitng my blogs. do keep on reading and helping me in
“Better to wake up from a bad dream, than to wake up to a nightmarish reality!”
Nice poem…I definetely enjoyed who it turned out!
thanks George!